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Hi guys, This is my first time writing short storys, so please be kind but also please comment truthful suggestions to help me progress better and let me know if I should have added something or if ive missed something. :) This isnt quet finished either. Ok here we go...... It was a dark, cold and rainy day as I walked briskly along the pathway of a long and windy road that was surrounded by a couple of trees and bushes. A few metres along the road I heard a noise, like a rustle in the bushes then a bang like something heavy falling, I turned and looked over my shoulders to see if I could spot what was causing this noise and my trebling. Wh